Your writing's not blather, John. Your writing's great. It's your Shift key that sucks.
I will say this, though:
it's an inner beauty i see in all these people, a beauty of spirit unleashed. something that the unruffled hothouse beauty of california girls will never quite capture despite its own mythic purity.
You do realize California is where they make all the porn, right?
What's with the cut text?
I will say this, though:
it's an inner beauty i see in all these people, a beauty of spirit unleashed. something that the unruffled hothouse beauty of california girls will never quite capture despite its own mythic purity.
You do realize California is where they make all the porn, right?